Echo Jungle

You should read “Echo Jungle” on Wattpad. http://w.tt/1AUSz2Y

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Posted on June 7, 2015, in Uncategorized and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.

  1. I just did. A little confusing at some points, but I think you’re on to something.

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    • What was confusing? I can go back and rewrite if I need to while I’m just three chapters in

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      • The similar names, Boo and Boe, threw me off at times. There was also one point where I believe you changed scenes/characters (chapter 2, from Boe’s memory of the horses to Bo’s stop and the market) but couldn’t tell.

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  2. Boogati (Boo) had the memory of horses
    Boe is just Boe who was also in chapter 1

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