Posted by N.Deadman
You should read “Echo Jungle” on Wattpad. http://w.tt/1AUSz2Y
Posted on June 7, 2015, in Uncategorized and tagged creative writing, drugs, fantasy, fiction, story, turf war, wattpad, writing. Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.
I just did. A little confusing at some points, but I think you’re on to something.
What was confusing? I can go back and rewrite if I need to while I’m just three chapters in
The similar names, Boo and Boe, threw me off at times. There was also one point where I believe you changed scenes/characters (chapter 2, from Boe’s memory of the horses to Bo’s stop and the market) but couldn’t tell.
Boogati (Boo) had the memory of horses
Boe is just Boe who was also in chapter 1
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